My Revising writing.

Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on the D. D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in winch we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here is my piece of writing .

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat called Oscar. He is a tabby cat,Oscar can be a pain.He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always comes to my house hungry. Oscar likes to sleep on my couch.Oscar hates laptop computer’s. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like to sit on my lap to get the attention.